Thank you! ❤️ I did probably go a little off the rails with the polys lol but they’re subject to change once I figure out how I’ll set up the mechanics for it. But all included polys I settle on will have dynamics worth exploring! :) ❤️
it's actually so cool, so cool that I had to register to write to you about it. your style is something beyond!
plot is incredible. It's hard to call me an empathic person, but here, reading and absorbing the grieve of the main character, the emotions of their loss and mourning, I couldn't help but feel it myself. truly magnificent work.
can't wait to meet the other characters. with the emotions you put into them, they seem truly alive.
I sincerely wish you success in what you are doing! can't wait for further updates!
Thank you so much!! 🙏🥰❤️💖💕💗 That’s very sweet that you made an account just to comment! I really appreciate it and am so happy it resonated with you that much! :D Thank you so much for reading and I’m excited to introduce the rest of the cast!
Contrasting what I'm sure is the prevailing opinion, Aurynn is absolutely awful. Detest this shitty shifty man and his fucking mind manipulation (that entire interaction solidified and justified my loathing). Really wish we could push back against him, his touchiness and flirting and such, but there's not much allowance for that. Like we're not allowed to actually dislike him in the story, and for such a character I find that really unpleasant and jarring
I do apologize if in any way it has come off that this game has been exclusive of anyone based on their orientation—you may hold me accountable for when I have genuinely messed up in such regards, though that was never my intention. That said, there are more constructive and meaningful ways in which you can phrase your criticisms—thank you. There are a few things you mentioned which I will not change, as they are very specifically related to certain character motivations that I have not yet had a chance to explain given how early on in the game it is, and I first and foremost write for the characters/plot and for myself. The dynamic between mc and Aurynn is in part related to a flawed character perception and in part simply a lighthearted flirtatious platonic dynamic I have enjoyed in other stories between platonic characters. I am one person and it is not always easy to balance several perspectives that players might bring to the game, however I can see how in some ways that dynamic would make certain players uncomfortable and for that I do apologize, as again, it wasn’t my intention, but I should have foreseen some people might not view a platonic flirtation the same way. I will work to restructure the dynamic between mc and Aurynn for players who would prefer not to have a lightheartedly flirtatious platonic relationship, and I will work to better keep in mind that when going forward, and again, I do truly apologize for any discomfort or hurt I caused in that regard.
i usually play IF for the romance, but the plot of this story has me hooked so much that i wasn't even focused on trying to pursue any romance! i loved the dream sequences with our siblings - learning how parim died was depressing but aurora's death especially really got to me. the description of her boating corpse when she is talking to you at the Strait of Auganite (i hope i spelled it right) was vivid. i loved how unsettling and hopeless that scene felt with her describing her last moments and the serpent lurking in the sea.
all of the interactions with our siblings made me tear up, it's embarrassing how much i was crying tbh 😭 i'm genuinely so invested in the plot and our interactions with the siblings.
i'm so surprised this IF isn't more popular - your writing is so well and the characters all feel dynamic, the plot is really interesting. i love it! eagerly looking forward to more!
Thank you so much for the sweet and thoughtful message and for sharing your thoughts!! 🙏❤️ I’m really glad you enjoyed it and all the platonic relationships too! I’m a sucker for family and friendship dynamics (romance too but siblings especially hook me in stories) so there will be plenty of meaningful platonic development in the game and more sibling stuff! 💜
That scene with Aurora took me several tries to get it right, so I’m glad that one really stuck with you! I was pretty proud of some of the descriptions there too so >:3 👍 (and it’s always still so humbling to hear my writing has made people cry…? 🥺❤️)
Thank you again for sharing your experience with the story and for your kind words! I hope you enjoy the story as it updates! :D ❤️
Genuinely the best one Ive ever seen. Has me captivated at every turn. The character development is SO good. It feels like each of them is actually real. I also love the variety of choices cause it really lets you create a character that you could see yourself being. Had me HOOKED I tell you. NOt to rush you but I cannot WAIT for the next update.
Ah, however,
PLEASE TELL ME AURYNN ISN'T A SPY CAUSE I NEED HIM TO BE THE PLATONIC BESTIE
Also what does RO mean? I assume since Alektis is Non-RO we wont see her in the story?
Thank you so much—I’m so glad you liked it so much!! ❤️❤️ Will try to finish the next update asap lol 🫡 I want to get to chapter 2 already :P
I can’t really say anything on any theories bc spoilers :P but he can be your platonic bestie/wingman (if applicable) 👍👍❤️
Also RO stands for romance option (they’ll all have meaningful platonic routes too <3). Alektis will show up in the game—you’ll meet her in chapter 2 with the rest of the ROs. She just isn’t romanceable. :)
Thanks again for reading and commenting! ❤️ Take care! :D
I stumbled across this IF on tumblr and hoo boy. Hoo BOY. Your writing has me absolutely captivated and utterly gutted. Every scene regarding the MC's family, Luca, and the war just had me sitting there clawing at my chest like "oh fuck. oh no. ohhhhh no" and just kinda spiraling with the facts that 1.) there is very little to be done about what has already passed and 2.) there is nothing to do but continue.
I am so excited and scared (in a good, anticipatory, "oh god what pain are you putting MC through this time"-kind of way) for future updates!!! you're doin amazing!!!
My friend, I am already curled up into a ball of enthusiasm in anticipation for Lilith/Lucien! I absolutely already KNOW they will be the one for me, with the character summary that already has me going feral, and with how exquisite your writing has been already? Oh, I just cannot wait! The demo so far has already been so lush with detail, so lovely! ☺️
I’m very excited to introduce them to you! I’ve been chewing on furniture itching to write chapter 2 forever now lol. Just one more update to finish chapter one and then I can finally write Chp 2 and introduce the rest of the ROs!!! 🫡🫡🫡🫡
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I love the story so far. Although I feel like it would be a lot easier to understand dynamics if there were less poly routes (around 2-5)
Thank you! ❤️ I did probably go a little off the rails with the polys lol but they’re subject to change once I figure out how I’ll set up the mechanics for it. But all included polys I settle on will have dynamics worth exploring! :) ❤️
it's actually so cool, so cool that I had to register to write to you about it. your style is something beyond!
plot is incredible. It's hard to call me an empathic person, but here, reading and absorbing the grieve of the main character, the emotions of their loss and mourning, I couldn't help but feel it myself. truly magnificent work.
can't wait to meet the other characters. with the emotions you put into them, they seem truly alive.
I sincerely wish you success in what you are doing! can't wait for further updates!
Thank you so much!! 🙏🥰❤️💖💕💗 That’s very sweet that you made an account just to comment! I really appreciate it and am so happy it resonated with you that much! :D Thank you so much for reading and I’m excited to introduce the rest of the cast!
Excellent, meticulously-crafted writing. I was utterly delighted with the inclusion of the detail that books are best handed with bare, clean skin.
Thank you!! :D ❤️💕🥰 I’m glad you noticed that lil detail lol ദ്ദി ˉ͈̀꒳ˉ͈́ )✧
This game is amazing! I cannot wait for further updates keep up the great work!!
Thank you!! ❤️
Contrasting what I'm sure is the prevailing opinion, Aurynn is absolutely awful. Detest this shitty shifty man and his fucking mind manipulation (that entire interaction solidified and justified my loathing). Really wish we could push back against him, his touchiness and flirting and such, but there's not much allowance for that. Like we're not allowed to actually dislike him in the story, and for such a character I find that really unpleasant and jarring
I do apologize if in any way it has come off that this game has been exclusive of anyone based on their orientation—you may hold me accountable for when I have genuinely messed up in such regards, though that was never my intention. That said, there are more constructive and meaningful ways in which you can phrase your criticisms—thank you. There are a few things you mentioned which I will not change, as they are very specifically related to certain character motivations that I have not yet had a chance to explain given how early on in the game it is, and I first and foremost write for the characters/plot and for myself. The dynamic between mc and Aurynn is in part related to a flawed character perception and in part simply a lighthearted flirtatious platonic dynamic I have enjoyed in other stories between platonic characters. I am one person and it is not always easy to balance several perspectives that players might bring to the game, however I can see how in some ways that dynamic would make certain players uncomfortable and for that I do apologize, as again, it wasn’t my intention, but I should have foreseen some people might not view a platonic flirtation the same way. I will work to restructure the dynamic between mc and Aurynn for players who would prefer not to have a lightheartedly flirtatious platonic relationship, and I will work to better keep in mind that when going forward, and again, I do truly apologize for any discomfort or hurt I caused in that regard.
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i usually play IF for the romance, but the plot of this story has me hooked so much that i wasn't even focused on trying to pursue any romance! i loved the dream sequences with our siblings - learning how parim died was depressing but aurora's death especially really got to me. the description of her boating corpse when she is talking to you at the Strait of Auganite (i hope i spelled it right) was vivid. i loved how unsettling and hopeless that scene felt with her describing her last moments and the serpent lurking in the sea.
all of the interactions with our siblings made me tear up, it's embarrassing how much i was crying tbh 😭 i'm genuinely so invested in the plot and our interactions with the siblings.
i'm so surprised this IF isn't more popular - your writing is so well and the characters all feel dynamic, the plot is really interesting. i love it! eagerly looking forward to more!
Thank you so much for the sweet and thoughtful message and for sharing your thoughts!! 🙏❤️ I’m really glad you enjoyed it and all the platonic relationships too! I’m a sucker for family and friendship dynamics (romance too but siblings especially hook me in stories) so there will be plenty of meaningful platonic development in the game and more sibling stuff! 💜
That scene with Aurora took me several tries to get it right, so I’m glad that one really stuck with you! I was pretty proud of some of the descriptions there too so >:3 👍 (and it’s always still so humbling to hear my writing has made people cry…? 🥺❤️)
Thank you again for sharing your experience with the story and for your kind words! I hope you enjoy the story as it updates! :D ❤️
I think you made Aurynn too perfect! I'm not complaining, though~ I love him so much, omg! 😍🥰❤️
Thank you, I’m glad you like him! ❤️ I’m going to do terrible things to him :D
I just want to marry Aurynn already. Is that too much to ask?
One day 👍❤️
Genuinely the best one Ive ever seen. Has me captivated at every turn. The character development is SO good. It feels like each of them is actually real. I also love the variety of choices cause it really lets you create a character that you could see yourself being. Had me HOOKED I tell you. NOt to rush you but I cannot WAIT for the next update.
Ah, however,
PLEASE TELL ME AURYNN ISN'T A SPY CAUSE I NEED HIM TO BE THE PLATONIC BESTIE
Also what does RO mean? I assume since Alektis is Non-RO we wont see her in the story?
Thank you so much—I’m so glad you liked it so much!! ❤️❤️ Will try to finish the next update asap lol 🫡 I want to get to chapter 2 already :P
I can’t really say anything on any theories bc spoilers :P but he can be your platonic bestie/wingman (if applicable) 👍👍❤️
Also RO stands for romance option (they’ll all have meaningful platonic routes too <3). Alektis will show up in the game—you’ll meet her in chapter 2 with the rest of the ROs. She just isn’t romanceable. :)
Thanks again for reading and commenting! ❤️ Take care! :D
I stumbled across this IF on tumblr and hoo boy. Hoo BOY. Your writing has me absolutely captivated and utterly gutted. Every scene regarding the MC's family, Luca, and the war just had me sitting there clawing at my chest like "oh fuck. oh no. ohhhhh no" and just kinda spiraling with the facts that 1.) there is very little to be done about what has already passed and 2.) there is nothing to do but continue.
I am so excited and scared (in a good, anticipatory, "oh god what pain are you putting MC through this time"-kind of way) for future updates!!! you're doin amazing!!!
Thank you so much!! ❤️💕 Indeed nothing to do but to keep going 🫡🫡 (sorry mc—and everyone really—the pain train has only just left the station 😬😰)
Thanks so much for reading and for commenting!! ❤️ Working on the next update 🫡 I hope you enjoy it! :D
My friend, I am already curled up into a ball of enthusiasm in anticipation for Lilith/Lucien! I absolutely already KNOW they will be the one for me, with the character summary that already has me going feral, and with how exquisite your writing has been already? Oh, I just cannot wait! The demo so far has already been so lush with detail, so lovely! ☺️
I’m very excited to introduce them to you! I’ve been chewing on furniture itching to write chapter 2 forever now lol. Just one more update to finish chapter one and then I can finally write Chp 2 and introduce the rest of the ROs!!! 🫡🫡🫡🫡
Thanks so much for reading and commenting! ❤️ :D