Stygian Sun: Total Eclipse IF

I love the story so far. Although I feel like it would be a lot easier to understand dynamics if there were less poly routes (around 2-5)

it's actually so cool, so cool that I had to register to write to you about it. your style is something beyond! 

plot is incredible. It's hard to call me an empathic person, but here, reading and absorbing the grieve of the main character, the emotions of their loss and mourning, I couldn't help but feel it myself. truly magnificent work.

can't wait to meet the other characters. with the emotions you put into them, they seem truly alive. 

I sincerely wish you success in what you are doing! can't wait for further updates!

Excellent, meticulously-crafted writing. I was utterly delighted with the inclusion of the detail that books are best handed with bare, clean skin.

This game is amazing! I cannot wait for further updates keep up the great work!! 

Contrasting what I'm sure is the prevailing opinion, Aurynn is absolutely awful. Detest this shitty shifty man and his fucking mind manipulation (that entire interaction solidified and justified my loathing). Really wish we could push back against him, his touchiness and flirting and such, but there's not much allowance for that. Like we're not allowed to actually dislike him in the story, and for such a character I find that really unpleasant and jarring

warning: contains spoilers

i usually play IF for the romance, but the plot of this story has me hooked so much that i wasn't even focused on trying to pursue any romance! i loved the dream sequences with our siblings - learning how parim died was depressing but aurora's death especially really got to me. the description of her boating corpse when she is talking to you at the Strait of Auganite (i hope i spelled it right) was vivid. i loved how unsettling and hopeless that scene felt with her describing her last moments and the serpent lurking in the sea.

all of the interactions with our siblings made me tear up, it's embarrassing how much i was crying tbh 😭 i'm genuinely so invested in the plot and our interactions with the siblings. 

i'm so surprised this IF isn't more popular - your writing is so well and the characters all feel dynamic, the plot is really interesting. i love it! eagerly looking forward to more!

I think you made Aurynn too perfect! I'm not complaining, though~ I love him so much, omg! 😍🥰❤️

I just want to marry Aurynn already. Is that too much to ask?

Genuinely the best one Ive ever seen. Has me captivated at every turn. The character development is SO good. It feels like each of them is actually real. I also love the variety of choices cause it really lets you create a character that you could see yourself being. Had me HOOKED I tell you. NOt to rush you but I cannot WAIT for the next update.

 Ah, however, 

PLEASE TELL ME AURYNN ISN'T A SPY CAUSE I NEED HIM TO BE THE PLATONIC BESTIE

Also what does RO mean? I assume since Alektis is Non-RO we wont see her in the story?

I stumbled across this IF on tumblr and hoo boy. Hoo BOY. Your writing has me absolutely captivated and utterly gutted. Every scene regarding the MC's family, Luca, and the war just had me sitting there clawing at my chest like "oh fuck. oh no. ohhhhh no" and just kinda spiraling with the facts that 1.) there is very little to be done about what has already passed and 2.) there is nothing to do but continue.

I am so excited and scared (in a good, anticipatory, "oh god what pain are you putting MC through this time"-kind of way) for future updates!!! you're doin amazing!!!

My friend, I am already curled up into a ball of enthusiasm in anticipation for Lilith/Lucien! I absolutely already KNOW they will be the one for me, with the character summary that already has me going feral, and with how exquisite your writing has been already? Oh, I just cannot wait! The demo so far has already been so lush with detail, so lovely! ☺️ 

I'm SOBBING- but also I need you to look me in the eye and tell me Aurynn isn't some kind of traitor, spy, or thief cause that letter seems pretty incriminating

AURYNN 😭😭😭 AURYNN.

I have to start of saying that this update was absolutely amazing 🙏 you have such a way with immersion to the point that it's visceral. And you describe things so good that I, being as stupid as I may be, can still visualize the environments and actions of the characters lol :3 I could practically feel every emotion that the MC did and I forgot how much Farah and her realness hurt me DX I am however having problems with the save system though. When the update first came out all my saves were gone (which was to be expected) but it was whatever because I'll find any excuse to replay this game :p yesterday I finished replaying and all that and I exported my saves but now that you've updated the mobile layout the saves are gone again and even though I've imported them again when I try to load them it just shows this (like I said earlier I'd find any excuse to replay but I fear if this may cause future problems so yk 🤷‍♂️)

(edit- very sorry if this is confusing I'm extremely bad at explaining :(()

Loved the update! So excited for more!

Thoroughly enjoyed the update! Loving the themes revolving around fate so far and I can't wait to see how that plays out. And once again, I love the continued depth of the MC, I'm usually drawn to playing sweet beans but for some reason in this IF I couldn't help myself from making a charismatic and manipulative ass who cares deeply underneath all that.

One issue, the mobile version has some funky formatting (I ended up playing on my computer because I couldn't wait, but I prefer mobile):

I haven't even started the game yet but it looks sooooo interesting, i'll update once I'm done with it!!! so excited ^^

The depictions of grief in this IF are soooo good. I teared up several times while reading it. I cant wait to see where this goes :)) 

absolute banger of a demo 🔥🔥 cannot wait for more 🙏🙏 thank you for the brain nourishment 🙏🙏

loved this !! also love how u included music <33 cant wait for more <3

Is there a downloadable version of this game?

My browser refuse to run it.... >_>

(Although it seems to run downloaded browser based games just fine. I have no clue why. o_O )

this is genuinely so fite bror i would eat this all over again <3

would u believe me if I said I almost cried with Farah DX anyways love this IF sm!!!! Easily up in my top 5!!!! :D can't wait for more updates ^_^

so good <3 needless to say its now one of my fav wips. also the ROs are so interesting :D

Amazing character interaction and dialogue! All the characters are so vibrant with personality.

That was such a delight to read and I can't wait to meet the rest of the cast, they all sound so intriguing! The choices felt so fluid, and I already feel like my MC is more well fleshed out and complex than I'm used to in IF, which is very fun!

Just here to say that it is now one of my fav wips...can't wait for more!!!

I love, this is beautiful!! I really want to read more

This is amazing!! I'm so looking forward to meeting the rest of the cast as I love the ones we've currently met.

Fen, My God, no amount of words can describe how much I want to just implode. the story-line is so thrilling , captivating, anchoring even. every character literally has my heart  (Farah more than anything) and I cant stand being with out more of this wonderful creation. though I wanted to imagine the protagonist sparring or engaged in at least a battle. This was fantastic the work you put into making this was worth it.

I cried multiple times playing this and only the first chapter is available 😭, wonderfully written characters and playing the MC is so so fun. I will be following this story for sure, thank you so much for sharing it!

Ridiculously charismatic characters, gorgeous art and lovely writing featuring delightfully tragic sibling angst. Every single character has charmed me and the plot synopsis only intrigues me more. I look forward to future updates! <3

so how do you feel about making me shed an uncontrollable amount of tears with the loss and grief of our siblings???,,.,,,fjskdjsk. on a separate note. having lost my older sister to an accident, the grief written in this story is so beautifully portrayed and dear fucking god it was so uncanny how accurate the process of grieving was to mine. very well done, and beautifully written!! i can't wait to see more from you 💖💖

I'm gonna throw up, this is so sad. 10/10
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Mobile version?

hey i have a question the game. i played this before but then i had to stop bc the chapter ended so after a little bit i found out the game had updated (aka today, bc i when back to a old save to finish where i left off) but i go and try to find out where my charter info is so i go on stats bc i didn't find a charter info thingy. But it said something like 'Currently Unviable' but idk if this is wrong and that i'm looking at a wrong place to look or that i need to restart the game, can someone please help ty ^^

fantastic update!!