Currently a bit strapped for cash atm so I only donated 1 dollar, but I truly love this IF so much so I wanted to show my support in any way I can :3 I'll donate again when I've got more money to spare. Keep up the great work!!!
Oh - HAI I’m back! :D And - WOW: Look at YOU, completing an Entire ACT! 🥳 I thought I’d wait until you got further along since it’s painful for me having to start over each time I play a game - esp once further in (Zero blame there -- I know you’re constantly updating your work and that’s incredibly important). Re-reading this from the beginning just made me appreciate + realize — your: poignant writing all over again. It really is so Breathtaking.... But -! on to thinky thoughts/comments!
…it’s Funny! I never noticed: when the tent explodes in the first part from the (DUM DUM DUUUM)Stalking Presence — the porcelain tea set shatters! And later on, Farah breaks it! Was this dream also telling the future since MC has that power? If so: WELL *DONE*. Very Clever~
Oh my Goodness - I LOVED meeting my mother - SO MUCH?? Like, that TALK at the end with the story and how she got — REALEST. And my MC - freaking the Fuzz out: Delicious. 10/10. I really Adore complicated relationships with more (- seemingly)’nicer’ choices, so I chose being close to Moh-ver, and the underlying Tension there — even *IF* forgiven + how Phoebe clearly does not forgive *Herself* for who she had to sculpt her child to be to come back alive - - OOF~ Eating it with a SPOON. Your characters CONTINUE to be so friggin multifaceted and Spectacularly written/fleshed out. And that's - - Impressive, given there's so many (and many MORE) at this point. It makes me so excited to meet more ROs; but also to see this new country and their people in Act Dos.
(HOW???)You continue to be Amazing at - F-ing me All the way up with: Gory ass descriptions of my dead siblings whom I—CANNOT SAVE
I’m not mad at how it *Hits* — but - ow. OW, OKAY Can I just love Aurora and the rest without my MC getting beaten to near-death? ...No? *le siiiigh* lol
I cried at Nour’s Death vision. You wrote that Phenomenally; truly - one of my fav scenes in the Act. I teared up and my throat Burned. Seeing my aloof, dignified MC baby (who - Cares so MUCH) — snap… be Called out by Luca, who *KNOWS* her…. Wow. Heavy. Heavy-gorgeous. And I can’t help but appreciate how you - -Let us craft this character that's so stunningly complex. So very.... human.
Like - GAAAWD - she’s so STRONG and IMPERIOUS AND - - SAAAD (P.S. you're Evil for making us have to break a promise to Farah - AGAIN)But, we SAVED Nour -- and I LOVED that.
You probably don't remember, but I mentioned being suuuper interested in seeing how Kieran turns out, as I'd find a romance with them + Samira to be REALLY interesting, dynamic-wise. So, very much excited for this new act; Equally for the romance and plot. Honestly have no notes: Keep flowing~ You're doing Incredible work. ❤️
Thank you so much for so thoughtful a message!! 💖🐛 I’m so glad you enjoyed the update and rereading the story! Phoebe’s talk was def a struggle to get to a point I was happy with, but she’s a very fun character to explore and I also adore complicated relationships! :3 Kieran and Sam will definitely be interesting to write—they both share similar circumstances of their births and how that shaped them. Thanks again for reading and your message!! I really appreciate reading them—they make my day!! :D 💖💖
uh, this might just be me but all my saves seem to be broken. The import feature for save files keeps telling me that my files aren’t for Stygian Sun but I’m pretty sure that they are. I don’t mind starting over, but I’m just curious. Has this happened to anyone else? Did the update break save files?
Ive heard it happen for a lot of people when updates come out for lots of different IFs. Sometimes they seem to break and other times they dont—not sure what causes it, but there is a quick start option for the new content unless you were wanting to start elsewhere.
This game is awesome! When we got on the boat i audibly prayed that it was not the end of the demo yet. Alas, it was.
I love the way you make us really care about the characters of the story. My siblings are angels who could never do anything wrong in their life i love them, and i don´t trust Aurynn ONE BIT!
The personality options are varied and i much enjoyed building my character (sincere, intimidating and dignified mostly so far).
Yay! Update! It’s been SIXTEEN hours since, I’m surprised no one’s talking about it yet. Cool, I look forward to finally meeting Father (and I’m one step closer to Kieran.. so close..)
Прошу прощения, если это звучит бессвязно — я пользуюсь Google Переводчиком. Но всё равно спасибо, что поделились этим! Для меня огромная честь слышать, что мои тексты кого-то растрогали до слёз. 💖
The text was truly moving. You’ve shown us one side of the tragedy, now I’m very keen to hear the other side. I have a feeling there’s even more drama in store for us.
This is such a beautiful story so far. I'm an only child, but the connection and loss of MC's siblings is so powerful. Your writing is a delight to all the senses!
i have been enjoying the game so far but it wont let me save my progress so i have to restart every time idk if it something up with the game or if its anything on my end, it just says" prompt () not suported" everytime i try
i havent heard anything like this from anyone else and it allows me to save just fine when i test it on my end. Perhaps try clearing your browser cache/cookies or using a different browser?
Make sure ur pressing save and load (on disk) options and not the import and export options, i've seen this in other IFs but the export and import options don't save ur progress lol
(PS the save and load options are below the import and export options)
Wow... this game was SO captivating. Genuinely so beautifully written. Your writing was very thorough and interesting. The characters really felt like they had a personality or mind of their own, which really set this IF apart from many I've read before. And the choice options, the customization? Amazing. If this is just the beginning I cannot wait for what's next to come. Seriously excited to meet the other characters !
wow just dang this is so so good love it. i will not lie i was tearing up most of the time ugh missing someone you love as clearly as MC dose for their family just guts me. i also have been digging through all the info on tumbler. i want to hug and tell all the poor RO's that my MC will love them unconditionally and want to hug them so bad. 10/10
Im so happy that this came across my recommended games! I've grown so attached to our family and the rest of the cast, the scenes with our siblibgs or at the very least when we reminisce them; never fail at making me emotional. Ive said so in my rating but I just cant stress enough how much ive come to enjoy this game. I cant wait for future updates <3
Any news regarding when the next update will be? I know I should be checking Tumblr or the like, but it's three in the morning and a migraine is killing me..
I know writing and coding all this takes time, so I'll wait patiently either way :]
I haven't played this in a good lil while, but I want you to know that I was scrolling and saw the thumbnail for it, thought too hard about it, and definitely got something in my eye! I wasn't getting a lil sniffly or anything. This game doesn't have that sort of power over me, no sir...I really hope it updates soon and I REALLY hope there's some more hugs. <3
man, I feel so bad for Farah. That’s going to be six older siblings ripped away from her in one way or another.. She’s a strong one, though. Probably my favourite non-RO character so far.
Love this IF, jeez. It’s honestly one of the best ones I’ve read, the characters feel so real lol. Cannot wait for the next part to meet Kieran! (i have my sights set on ‘em :])
I think i might have run into a glitch? I started a fresh run and got to the part where Luca asks you to focus and you go through character creation, but it then continues through the quick start menu and sends me straight to the Thissys ceremony. Did I mess up somewhere?
I have to fix the restart buttons in the side menu as there are two and one doesn’t reset the variables. Use the restart button with the power symbol next to it to restart—it should prompt you are you sure you want to restart/unsaved progress will be lost. If you had clicked the QuickStart feature before and didn’t restart with the power symbol button, it will cut to the Thissys ceremony when talking to Luca.
I was prepared for a grand old time when I saw the synopsis and the little RO tidbits and I definitely got that--along with so much more. Chapter 1 was long--it was so long yet I didn't even realized the time as I went through each page. It was painful--I actually teared up with tears streaming down my face. Sniffled and wiped my tears several times too. The garden talks with Farah. The Beachside. The trade under the orange tree. Holy shit the trade under the orange tree. I didn't expected to be as affected by it but I was. I would have definitely faltered if I was the MC.
The Chapter was the perfect length to get me attached and GDI you got me attached. It hurts so much ; w ; My chest tightened and actually hurt aaaa. You have a way with words that just evokes so much emotions out of me--especially the familial scenes. Amazing writing and story. I'm a big fan of everything that's happening here.
I'm so excited for your future updates. I will eagerly await for more. Thank you for sharing your work with us!
Thank you so much for such a kind and thoughtful message!! T-T 💖💖 I really appreciated hearing your thoughts and I’m so happy you enjoyed it and am so touched you cried! Thanks so much again for taking the time to share this—I do so appreciate it :) 🥹💖💖
I came here for the romance, the beautiful plot and the engaging storyline. I stayed because I cried until the end of the demo. My God.
I whined reading MC's family moments, but "Farwah would not stop crying at your door" finished me off. This is just the first chapter, THE FIRST! Why are you so crueeeeel? sobsobsob
You have an incredible ability to convey emotions, atmosphere, moments, memories that happened, but will never happen again. It's beautiful, touching, and incredible. It's heartbreaking, but that's the sign of true literature.
Thank you so much for such a touching and thoughtful message!! 💖💖 I’m always to humbled to hear when someone cried during the story—it means so much to hear how much the story meant to you! :) 💖 Thanks so so much for reading and for sharing your thoughts!! I really appreciate hearing them!!
I love love love this story so far, and the quality of your writing is so immaculate. I'm not sure I have the words to describe how skilled you are at storytelling and how to make a world feel alive.
If I may ask, do you have plans for how the pacing will be going forward? I'm a little concerned with how slow the story is progressing, not because I think its done badly or anything like that, but I am a little worried this will turn into a behemoth of a project for you. (English is my second language so I hope I'm wording things right, I'm absolutely not meaning to be rude)
Thank you so much! I’m glad you’ve liked it!! 💖💖 I do expect it to be a larger story, but the pacing will definitely pick up from here—this segment of the story just focuses on some important emotional and plot set up. :) 👍💕 Thanks so much for reading and for sharing your thoughts!
Christ this update hurt me, and just like the last time I read it I teared up nearly the whole way through. You are an immensely talented writer and I'm so excited to see the rest of the story pan out. This work seems incredibly ambitious so (as I'm sure you already know) make sure to take time for yourself. Thank you for your hard work, so grateful to have been able to read it <3
holy shit, dude, this is incredible. i'm so excited to see where this goes!! found myself in tears quite often while reading TT the character customisation is awesome and i love having such a cohesive codex and stats page! and the worldbuildingggg omg. i can tell a lot of love went into this and you're a beautiful writer.
a note: i don't know if it's possible or something you're already working on, but having a back button is really appreciated when i read IF so i can go back and test out all the different choices, instead of having to go back on saves each time. i'm just a sucker for wringing every choice dry LOL
also need to mention, the way you describe love between siblings really speaks to me, especially between the mc and farah. it hit me hard thinking about my own love for my younger brother. will def be waiting with baited breath on my HANDS AND KNEEES for more updates (patiently) - and thank you!
Thank you so much for such a sweet message!! 🥹💖💖💕 This is for sure a passion project so I’m really happy to hear you’ve enjoyed the story so far!! I struggled a lot with the last update so I’m glad people have enjoyed it! I really love sibling/family dynamics in stories so of course I had to include it in this one 🛐 :3
I know the back buttons are super convenient, but I actually had to remove it because it messes with number-based stats and counter variables since the back button doesn’t reset stat changes from each passage. :)
Thank you so much for reading and for sharing your thoughts—I always appreciate them!! 💖💖
So so so so happy for an update! Your writing is just *chefs kiss* and i love how much your choices really impact your personality down to the most sinple reply! One of my fav IFs! Cant wait for more
this is so beautifully written and i am so in love with all the little customizations... i'm really looking forward to meeting the rest of the romance options and seeing how this goes omg i did not want to stop reading
Really enjoying the game thus far, can't wait for more to be released! The writing and characterization are both stellar, and have left me wanting more!
oh my god i LOVED this this was so good its genuinely insane. cant wait for cuapter 2 i NEED to meet kieran im going to enemies to lovers the shit out of that man. all that aside ohhh my god you did such a good job with everything but especially the description of mc guilt over the deaths of their siblings, farah as a grieving child, Mc refusing to back down and simply give into fate because fuck that!! they have to try!!! ughhh so good
I love this IF amazing game ty \o/!! AND ooooo two my fav are in poly route I love it Kieran/Lucien all the way <3 And I finally finished thou I really want more D: ! NOOOOOO DAMN DEMOS LOL
Thank you so much and I’m really glad you’ve liked it so far!! :D ❤️💕 Thank you for commenting and I hope you continue to enjoy the story as it updates! :D 💖
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Currently a bit strapped for cash atm so I only donated 1 dollar, but I truly love this IF so much so I wanted to show my support in any way I can :3 I'll donate again when I've got more money to spare. Keep up the great work!!!
Aw thank you!! Your support means a lot! Take care of yourself first!! :)) 💖🐛✨🌈
Oh - HAI I’m back! :D
And - WOW: Look at YOU, completing an Entire ACT! 🥳 I thought I’d wait until you got further along since it’s painful for me having to start over each time I play a game - esp once further in (Zero blame there -- I know you’re constantly updating your work and that’s incredibly important). Re-reading this from the beginning just made me appreciate + realize — your: poignant writing all over again. It really is so Breathtaking.... But -! on to thinky thoughts/comments!
…it’s Funny! I never noticed: when the tent explodes in the first part from the (DUM DUM DUUUM)Stalking Presence — the porcelain tea set shatters! And later on, Farah breaks it! Was this dream also telling the future since MC has that power? If so: WELL *DONE*. Very Clever~
Oh my Goodness - I LOVED meeting my mother - SO MUCH?? Like, that TALK at the end with the story and how she got — REALEST. And my MC - freaking the Fuzz out: Delicious. 10/10.
I really Adore complicated relationships with more (- seemingly)’nicer’ choices, so I chose being close to Moh-ver, and the underlying Tension there — even *IF* forgiven + how Phoebe clearly does not forgive *Herself* for who she had to sculpt her child to be to come back alive - - OOF~ Eating it with a SPOON. Your characters CONTINUE to be so friggin multifaceted and Spectacularly written/fleshed out. And that's - - Impressive, given there's so many (and many MORE) at this point. It makes me so excited to meet more ROs; but also to see this new country and their people in Act Dos.
(HOW???)You continue to be Amazing at - F-ing me All the way up with: Gory ass descriptions of my dead siblings whom I—CANNOT SAVE
I’m not mad at how it *Hits* — but - ow. OW, OKAY
Can I just love Aurora and the rest without my MC getting beaten to near-death? ...No? *le siiiigh* lol
I cried at Nour’s Death vision. You wrote that Phenomenally; truly - one of my fav scenes in the Act. I teared up and my throat Burned. Seeing my aloof, dignified MC baby (who - Cares so MUCH) — snap… be Called out by Luca, who *KNOWS* her…. Wow. Heavy. Heavy-gorgeous. And I can’t help but appreciate how you - -Let us craft this character that's so stunningly complex. So very.... human.
Like - GAAAWD - she’s so STRONG and IMPERIOUS AND - - SAAAD
(P.S. you're Evil for making us have to break a promise to Farah - AGAIN)But, we SAVED Nour -- and I LOVED that.
You probably don't remember, but I mentioned being suuuper interested in seeing how Kieran turns out, as I'd find a romance with them + Samira to be REALLY interesting, dynamic-wise. So, very much excited for this new act; Equally for the romance and plot. Honestly have no notes: Keep flowing~ You're doing Incredible work. ❤️
Thank you so much for so thoughtful a message!! 💖🐛 I’m so glad you enjoyed the update and rereading the story! Phoebe’s talk was def a struggle to get to a point I was happy with, but she’s a very fun character to explore and I also adore complicated relationships! :3 Kieran and Sam will definitely be interesting to write—they both share similar circumstances of their births and how that shaped them. Thanks again for reading and your message!! I really appreciate reading them—they make my day!! :D 💖💖
uh, this might just be me but all my saves seem to be broken. The import feature for save files keeps telling me that my files aren’t for Stygian Sun but I’m pretty sure that they are. I don’t mind starting over, but I’m just curious. Has this happened to anyone else? Did the update break save files?
Ive heard it happen for a lot of people when updates come out for lots of different IFs. Sometimes they seem to break and other times they dont—not sure what causes it, but there is a quick start option for the new content unless you were wanting to start elsewhere.
yes, the update broke mine too :( no worries! just an excuse to re-read an amazing story :D
Holy shit, the doomed siblings trope is CUTTING me up in pieces
a nice julienne 👌
I wasnt disappointed ! Loved it! Amazing update! I reread, I sobbed, and I can't wait for more 🙏
Yayy thank you!💖🐛
Loved the update!
Thank you! 💖
This game is awesome! When we got on the boat i audibly prayed that it was not the end of the demo yet. Alas, it was.
I love the way you make us really care about the characters of the story. My siblings are angels who could never do anything wrong in their life i love them, and i don´t trust Aurynn ONE BIT!
The personality options are varied and i much enjoyed building my character (sincere, intimidating and dignified mostly so far).
I´m looking forward to future updates!
Thanks sm for reading and sharing your thoughts! 💖
So so excited to do a reread for the new updates! Cant tell you how much i love this story! 10/10
Thank you—I hope you enjoy! 🐛
just reread all of it for the new update and more than once found myself crying. holy shit this is an amazing story. keep up the good work author!
Thank you so much!! I’m glad you enjoyed it! 💖
Yay! Update! It’s been SIXTEEN hours since, I’m surprised no one’s talking about it yet. Cool, I look forward to finally meeting Father (and I’m one step closer to Kieran.. so close..)
so excited to read it!
Thank you—I hope you enjoy it! 💖
В один момент я пролистываю сцену с сестренкой ГГ в кустах, а после этого все как в тумане.
Я вся в слезах и соплях. Мне больно, и, кажется, что у меня теперь разбито сердце.
Так и должно быть?
Прошу прощения, если это звучит бессвязно — я пользуюсь Google Переводчиком. Но всё равно спасибо, что поделились этим! Для меня огромная честь слышать, что мои тексты кого-то растрогали до слёз. 💖
We’re all relying on Google Translate.
The text was truly moving. You’ve shown us one side of the tragedy, now I’m very keen to hear the other side. I have a feeling there’s even more drama in store for us.
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This is such a beautiful story so far. I'm an only child, but the connection and loss of MC's siblings is so powerful. Your writing is a delight to all the senses!
Thank you, I’m so glad!! 💖
I have enjoyed every little bit of this masterpeice. i cant wait for the full game :)
Thank you! 💖
i have been enjoying the game so far but it wont let me save my progress so i have to restart every time idk if it something up with the game or if its anything on my end, it just says" prompt () not suported" everytime i try
i havent heard anything like this from anyone else and it allows me to save just fine when i test it on my end. Perhaps try clearing your browser cache/cookies or using a different browser?
okay thx ill try that!
Make sure ur pressing save and load (on disk) options and not the import and export options, i've seen this in other IFs but the export and import options don't save ur progress lol
(PS the save and load options are below the import and export options)
Wow... this game was SO captivating. Genuinely so beautifully written. Your writing was very thorough and interesting. The characters really felt like they had a personality or mind of their own, which really set this IF apart from many I've read before. And the choice options, the customization? Amazing. If this is just the beginning I cannot wait for what's next to come. Seriously excited to meet the other characters !
Ahh thank you!! 💖💖 I’m so touched to hear how much you enjoyed the characters and customization! It’s been fun to integrate!
wow just dang this is so so good love it. i will not lie i was tearing up most of the time ugh missing someone you love as clearly as MC dose for their family just guts me. i also have been digging through all the info on tumbler. i want to hug and tell all the poor RO's that my MC will love them unconditionally and want to hug them so bad. 10/10
Thank you sm!! 💖💖 Everyone needs a big hug fr 💔
Im so happy that this came across my recommended games! I've grown so attached to our family and the rest of the cast, the scenes with our siblibgs or at the very least when we reminisce them; never fail at making me emotional. Ive said so in my rating but I just cant stress enough how much ive come to enjoy this game. I cant wait for future updates <3
Thank you so much—it means so much to hear how much the story meant to you!! 💖💖
Any news regarding when the next update will be? I know I should be checking Tumblr or the like, but it's three in the morning and a migraine is killing me..
I know writing and coding all this takes time, so I'll wait patiently either way :]
I am writing the last scene to wrap up Act 1. I don’t have a set date yet, but I hope to have it out before the end of March. :) 💖
Wow, that was quick lol. Good to know, though! I shall eagerly await March!
I love Farrah so much, she deserves the world. I hate how much I cry with her scenes, she is just so precious.
She jus a baby fr 💖
This is great, I’m so hyped to read what comes next !!
Thank you—I’m glad you liked it! 💖
I haven't played this in a good lil while, but I want you to know that I was scrolling and saw the thumbnail for it, thought too hard about it, and definitely got something in my eye! I wasn't getting a lil sniffly or anything. This game doesn't have that sort of power over me, no sir...I really hope it updates soon and I REALLY hope there's some more hugs. <3
Im so touched it moved you that much T-T 💔 Thank you for sharing that!! 💖💖💖
man, I feel so bad for Farah. That’s going to be six older siblings ripped away from her in one way or another.. She’s a strong one, though. Probably my favourite non-RO character so far.
Love this IF, jeez. It’s honestly one of the best ones I’ve read, the characters feel so real lol. Cannot wait for the next part to meet Kieran! (i have my sights set on ‘em :])
Thank you so much—im glad you enjoyed it!! 💖 It makes me happy to hear you love Farah too! 💖:D
I think i might have run into a glitch? I started a fresh run and got to the part where Luca asks you to focus and you go through character creation, but it then continues through the quick start menu and sends me straight to the Thissys ceremony. Did I mess up somewhere?
I have to fix the restart buttons in the side menu as there are two and one doesn’t reset the variables. Use the restart button with the power symbol next to it to restart—it should prompt you are you sure you want to restart/unsaved progress will be lost. If you had clicked the QuickStart feature before and didn’t restart with the power symbol button, it will cut to the Thissys ceremony when talking to Luca.
That fixed it, thank you!
I was prepared for a grand old time when I saw the synopsis and the little RO tidbits and I definitely got that--along with so much more. Chapter 1 was long--it was so long yet I didn't even realized the time as I went through each page. It was painful--I actually teared up with tears streaming down my face. Sniffled and wiped my tears several times too. The garden talks with Farah. The Beachside. The trade under the orange tree. Holy shit the trade under the orange tree. I didn't expected to be as affected by it but I was. I would have definitely faltered if I was the MC.
The Chapter was the perfect length to get me attached and GDI you got me attached. It hurts so much ; w ; My chest tightened and actually hurt aaaa. You have a way with words that just evokes so much emotions out of me--especially the familial scenes. Amazing writing and story. I'm a big fan of everything that's happening here.
I'm so excited for your future updates. I will eagerly await for more. Thank you for sharing your work with us!
Thank you so much for such a kind and thoughtful message!! T-T 💖💖 I really appreciated hearing your thoughts and I’m so happy you enjoyed it and am so touched you cried! Thanks so much again for taking the time to share this—I do so appreciate it :) 🥹💖💖
I came here for the romance, the beautiful plot and the engaging storyline. I stayed because I cried until the end of the demo. My God.
I whined reading MC's family moments, but "Farwah would not stop crying at your door" finished me off. This is just the first chapter, THE FIRST! Why are you so crueeeeel? sobsobsob
You have an incredible ability to convey emotions, atmosphere, moments, memories that happened, but will never happen again. It's beautiful, touching, and incredible. It's heartbreaking, but that's the sign of true literature.
Thank you so much for such a touching and thoughtful message!! 💖💖 I’m always to humbled to hear when someone cried during the story—it means so much to hear how much the story meant to you! :) 💖 Thanks so so much for reading and for sharing your thoughts!! I really appreciate hearing them!!
Finally read the update, I cried! This is so good, and I really cannot wait for more!
Thank you so much!! I’m so touched it made you cry! 🥹💖💖💖
I love love love this story so far, and the quality of your writing is so immaculate. I'm not sure I have the words to describe how skilled you are at storytelling and how to make a world feel alive.
If I may ask, do you have plans for how the pacing will be going forward? I'm a little concerned with how slow the story is progressing, not because I think its done badly or anything like that, but I am a little worried this will turn into a behemoth of a project for you. (English is my second language so I hope I'm wording things right, I'm absolutely not meaning to be rude)
Thank you so much! I’m glad you’ve liked it!! 💖💖 I do expect it to be a larger story, but the pacing will definitely pick up from here—this segment of the story just focuses on some important emotional and plot set up. :) 👍💕 Thanks so much for reading and for sharing your thoughts!
I don't really cry all that often, but DAMN,, I can't stop.
(hands you a tissue) 💖💖💖🥹sorry 🙏💕
Christ this update hurt me, and just like the last time I read it I teared up nearly the whole way through. You are an immensely talented writer and I'm so excited to see the rest of the story pan out. This work seems incredibly ambitious so (as I'm sure you already know) make sure to take time for yourself. Thank you for your hard work, so grateful to have been able to read it <3
Thank you so much for such a sweet and thoughtful message!! 💖💖 Thank you so much for reading and I’m so touched it made you tear up!! 🥹💖💖💖💕
holy shit, dude, this is incredible. i'm so excited to see where this goes!! found myself in tears quite often while reading TT the character customisation is awesome and i love having such a cohesive codex and stats page! and the worldbuildingggg omg. i can tell a lot of love went into this and you're a beautiful writer.
a note: i don't know if it's possible or something you're already working on, but having a back button is really appreciated when i read IF so i can go back and test out all the different choices, instead of having to go back on saves each time. i'm just a sucker for wringing every choice dry LOL
also need to mention, the way you describe love between siblings really speaks to me, especially between the mc and farah. it hit me hard thinking about my own love for my younger brother. will def be waiting with baited breath on my HANDS AND KNEEES for more updates (patiently) - and thank you!
Thank you so much for such a sweet message!! 🥹💖💖💕 This is for sure a passion project so I’m really happy to hear you’ve enjoyed the story so far!! I struggled a lot with the last update so I’m glad people have enjoyed it! I really love sibling/family dynamics in stories so of course I had to include it in this one 🛐 :3
I know the back buttons are super convenient, but I actually had to remove it because it messes with number-based stats and counter variables since the back button doesn’t reset stat changes from each passage. :)
Thank you so much for reading and for sharing your thoughts—I always appreciate them!! 💖💖
oh that makes sense! thanks for explaining :D
good luck working on the game and take care of urself!
So so so so happy for an update! Your writing is just *chefs kiss* and i love how much your choices really impact your personality down to the most sinple reply! One of my fav IFs! Cant wait for more
Thank you so much!! 💖💖 I’m glad you’ve enjoyed the personality stats/choices! :D
This is.. just amazing. I wasn’t expecting the story telling at all to be this good the details you put was so beautiful I had to sob for a min ✌️
Thank you so much!! :D ❤️💖 I’m so touched you were that moved by it!! Thank you again! ❤️❤️
this is so beautifully written and i am so in love with all the little customizations... i'm really looking forward to meeting the rest of the romance options and seeing how this goes omg i did not want to stop reading
Thank you so much!! I’m so happy you enjoyed it and I really appreciate you leaving a comment! It means a lot!! 💖💕💖 :D
Holy crap you write well 0.0
I felt way to many emotions at various points. Like. I was SAD. Lovely story ;-;
Wow. Thank you for writing!
Thank you so much!! It means a lot to hear!! :D 💖💕💖💖
i hope you dont see this as me pressuring you but rather as encouragement bc i swear i just cant get this IF out of my mind😭 NOUR MY SHAYLA
Thank you—I’m so glad you l enjoyed it!! :D Brainrot is the highest compliment 🤲💖💕
Really enjoying the game thus far, can't wait for more to be released! The writing and characterization are both stellar, and have left me wanting more!
Thank you so much and I’m so happy you’ve enjoyed it so far!! :D ❤️❤️
Could you add more hair color options like pink?
I probably won’t add more hair color options for a few reasons, but you’re always free to headcanon that for your MC! :)
oh my god i LOVED this this was so good its genuinely insane. cant wait for cuapter 2 i NEED to meet kieran im going to enemies to lovers the shit out of that man. all that aside ohhh my god you did such a good job with everything but especially the description of mc guilt over the deaths of their siblings, farah as a grieving child, Mc refusing to back down and simply give into fate because fuck that!! they have to try!!! ughhh so good
Thank you so much!! ❤️💕 I really appreciate it and I’m so glad you enjoyed it! :D 💖
Omg this made my day. I was literally LOLing hard over Aurynn. I died. Bravo 👏
Thank you so much!! I’m glad you liked it and that it made you laugh!! :D ❤️💖
I love this IF amazing game ty \o/!! AND ooooo two my fav are in poly route I love it Kieran/Lucien all the way <3 And I finally finished thou I really want more D: ! NOOOOOO DAMN DEMOS LOL
Thank you so much and I’m really glad you’ve liked it so far!! :D ❤️💕 Thank you for commenting and I hope you continue to enjoy the story as it updates! :D 💖